I love retellings, and the tale of "The Wild Swans" is a favorite of mine. "The Curse of Feathers" by Kimberly Bea is a fantasy retelling combining elements from both the Brothers Grimm tale "The Six Swans" and Hans Christian Andersen’s "The Wild Swans". I have read the original tales as well as a couple of retellings, and this version is surely an original. Well, as original as a retelling can be.
The book follows Elisa von Ahlefeldt, youngest daughter of a noble family. Unlike her elder six brothers, she is ellevilde—elf-wild—a child of nature. She runs freely in the forest and befriends Nuve, an ash-tree maid who teaches forest magic. Her life takes a turn for the worse after her mother dies and her father remarries the Hexe (a witch) who bewitched him. The stepmother, Belinde, transforms the boys into swans and alters the father's perception of his daughter. Elisa hides in the forest and starts sewing shirts from nettles using nalbinding and magic. She has to keep silent if there is any hope of breaking her brothers’ curse. It is not an easy task in a world that hates magic, where a witch is after her, and witches are burned at the stake.
Overall, I enjoyed the story. Although there is an excellent plot, the real strength of this book is the detailed character development of Elisa and the vivid descriptions of the setting. I liked this feminist version of the story, with themes of coming-of-age, physical suffering, penance, sacrifice, social class, and pagan vs. Christian elements. I appreciated the mysticism, the depictions of life in nature, and the witch trials, which felt authentic. I liked the contrast between the beauty of nature and the dark curse and the rich historical details. The book has an atmospheric, dark quality that fits the darker elements of the fairy tale particularly well.
Elisa and Nuve were really the only rounded characters. Some of the side characters (especially the brothers) were less developed or distinguished, but as they weren't the center of the tale, it didn't bother me. I liked their loyalty and love for their sister, admired Elisa's inner strength (not speaking for many years isn't easy, let me tell you), her determination to save her brothers, and her connection to nature. I also liked the relationship between her and Nuve, and the way they complemented each other.
While the writing is great, the book is a bit slow-paced and meanders a little, and could’ve been tightened up. The religious undertone was laid too thick to my taste, but was well merged into the tale. If you read the original tale, you will be familiar with the direction of the story, but there were several twists that made it fresh. The ending is different from the original tale, and I am in two minds about it. While I understood why Elisa made the choice she did, especially after everything she had endured, and even salute her for it, I am still in two minds about the ending. Of the two, Elisa and the stepmother, Elisa was the true feminist one.
That said, I liked the book and do recommend it to fans of fantasy retellings with a strong heroine, rich world-building, and a dark, atmospheric fairy-tale feel.
* Thank you NetGalley and (publisher) for the opportunity to read this arc. All opinions are my own.* For more info about the book: "The Curse of Feathers" by Kimberly Bea









