A magical train, childhood friends to lovers, and a locked-room mystery, all my favorite tropes in one. Veiled in Shadow by Liz Edelbrock is a delightful YA debut romantasy set aboard a train, successfully blending fantasy, mystery, and romance and told from the first-person POV of its heroine.
The life of Princess Delana of Orsho changed after the death of her beloved mother. Her father isn't himself, escaping more and more from reality and sinking into his past memories. The realm's memory magic, which comes from the chrona larks, is fading after the birds migrated to a neighboring kingdom. This magic enabled them to spy on their citizens and prevent crimes and chaos before they occurred by accessing memories of past events. To restore the magic, a political marriage is arranged between Princess Delana and Prince Marc of Valmyrra. To save their kingdom, Del agrees to the marriage and, together with her entourage and personal bodyguard, boards the enchanted wedding train that will take her to her new home.
Prince Marc is on the train with his own people, along with a group from a third kingdom who will entertain them with their illusion magic. The plot thickens when there is a murder aboard, and it becomes clear that Del was its intended target. When a second murder occurs, Del and Bastian have to find the assassin before she is next. Trust doesn't come easily to Del, and she has to rely on her senses, not her vanishing magic, to find out whom to trust and uncover the truth. Add to that the fact that she soon finds she doesn't like Marc much and her heart belongs to another, which complicates matters. She not only has to find a murderer, but also choose between duty and love.
The book got off to a slow start, but the pace picked up after the first murder. The world-building is intriguing, and the magic system is original. I liked the concept of seeing past events via the magic and the connection between the magic and the birds. I enjoyed the descriptions of the train's marvels and the illusionists' magic. Incorporating sign language into their performances was a nice touch, although there was no mention of who needed it on the train.
Some of the characters came across as very genuine and well-rounded. My favorites were Del, Bastian, and Thalia. Del was a fierce heroine I came to root for, if a bit reckless. I winced whenever she put herself in dangerous situations with no second thought to her safety. Bastian was loyal and faithful, and I admired his dedication to the cause. Thalia competed with Del for the prince's attention and was hostile toward her. I didn't like her at first, but as she developed and I came to understand her side of things, my opinion of her changed. And don't let me start on Marc. He was shallow and vain, and I really didn't connect with him.
I liked the dynamic between Del and Bastian and the way their relationship developed. Their shared past made their relationship feel authentic. I also liked the way Del's character developed as she learned to open herself to others. Her memory flashbacks were a nice touch, though there were a bit too many of them at times. The book explores themes of surveillance, trust, duty, sacrifice, and love, as well as the importance of following your heart. The plot was a bit predictable, but as I didn't guess the identity of the murderer, I was fine with that. A couple of things made me raise a brow, though. I don't want to enter into spoilers, but in general terms, the way one of the suspects was so quickly deemed innocent felt a little too convenient.
That said, I enjoyed the story, so I only deducted one star. The world-building, characters, magic system, and engaging plot made it an enjoyable read. The ending is also fulfilling, and I like that it's a stand-alone. There are a couple of love scenes. Though not explicit, they may not be suitable for younger readers, so be aware. All in all, I liked the book and recommend it to fans of political intrigue, forced proximity, forbidden romance, and magic. Oh, yes!* Thank you NetGalley and (publisher) for the opportunity to read this arc. All opinions are my own.
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